This Sunday is the one year anniversary of Sara Brookes' Six Sentence Sunday and all participating authors and bloggers are giving away a prize, whether an ebook, in-print book or book store gift certificates- My prize is my recent released novella Room 11- so to celebrate I've included my six from Room 11.He removed her delicate thong, starting at mid-thigh to begin kissing her exquisite skin. Her taste was like none ever experienced before, sweet and pleasing, inviting his attention. He felt her skin quiver, craving his touch.
With each kiss, her breathing quickened. He moved closer to her center and the anticipation of where he was heading was heard in the quiescent room.
From Paige's erratic breathing to the gentle motion evolving in her hips, he could tell she had lost herself in the need for him.
For all the contributing bloggers and authors, visit the official Six Sentence Sunday Website for your chance to win more ebooks and prizes.
Oh yum. Nice and sexy!
ReplyDeleteHot excerpt and picture! Wow!
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, starting the morning off with heat. Nice snippet1
ReplyDeleteWell- after all the snow that fell her yesterday and last night- I figured some heat was necessary
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to lay a word like quiescent on me, and yet it didn't distract from the rhythm at all. Rather, it enhanced the moment, giving it a hiss-sounding pause right where one would be naturally. That's some slick writing right there.
ReplyDeleteOh wow, I think the picture says it all!! very hot!!
ReplyDeletexx
Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com
Nice, Dawne. The descriptors were perfect, the words flowed, and it was hot, hot, hot! :)
ReplyDeletegem
nice snippet!
ReplyDelete*phew* Need to stick my head out the window now! Great 6!
ReplyDeleteVery hot. Nice!
ReplyDeleteVivien- that is the sweetest comment I have ever received as an author, considering how much I look up to you and your writing...thank you
ReplyDeleteYeh, thats it.
ReplyDelete@ Gem...ditto- your compliment on my writing is overwhelming too- thank you
ReplyDeleteSexy, and the image fits it perfectly. There was nothing to take me out of the reading. Of course, now I want more.
ReplyDeleteWow, that was HOT. And the picture...HOLY SMOKIN' WOW!
ReplyDeleteInspiring pic, inspiring scene!
ReplyDeleteHot Hot Hot. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteVery yummy six! Love it AND the pic! Holy moly!
ReplyDelete~Sarah
The picture is bored into my head...the sensuality of the scene fits with the visual- thanks everyone for visiting
ReplyDeleteDelicious!
ReplyDeleteNice six, I almost lost myself in her need for him, too! Phew, hot stuff
ReplyDeleteOh my, that's some very sexy imagery!
ReplyDeletejoderjo402 AT gmail DOT com
Very, very yummy!
ReplyDeleteVery steamy!
ReplyDeleteWowza! That's a hot snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sexy six!
ReplyDeleteI agree, that six definitely warmed me right up.
ReplyDeleteA nice hot scene for a cold winter day... glad you all enjoyed
ReplyDeleteVery steamy scene, melted the snow for sure!
ReplyDeleteSexy six! Woot!
ReplyDeleteGoing to have to step outside and let the cold weather cool me off a bit. Wow, that's hot!
ReplyDeleteWhew, that's pretty spicy. :) Nice job.
ReplyDeleteSexy! Love the image of her thong being removed.
ReplyDeleteSexy six! :)
ReplyDeletevery hot!
ReplyDelete